Xanadu, September 1, 2023

This Show Case features four pieces submitted in response to our fiftieth Writing Prompt: Xanadu. You can see responses to each prompt in the drop down menu for the Show Case page. Try an item. They are all delicious. We hope they stimulate your mind, spirit, and urge to write. Maybe they will motivate you to submit a piece for our next prompt, which you can find on the Show Case home page.

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Meadow Lake by SL Randall

“I thought you believed in the turd.”

“I did. I do. I’ve never met a more talented facilitator. He had his unfortunate side. You take the good with the bad.”

Photo credit: Luke Southern, Unsplash

26 responses to “Xanadu, September 1, 2023”

  1. mimispeike Avatar
    mimispeike

    Perry, I enjoy everything you write. Another lovely piece.

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  2. Sue Ranscht Avatar

    Thank you, contributors, for sharing your creativity, and thanks to all of you who will read and comment. I’m grateful for this writers’ community.

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  3. Sandy Randall Avatar

    Show Case Friday! I actually forgot it was Friday. It’s been a busy week!
    Sue, seeing that picture all loud and proud as the featured image gave me a giggle. Honestly folks, I am completely sober when I do art. (Should I admit that?) Completely sober, yes, all there? No. That was me getting started on the word prompt. What actually worked, was the conversation we had about writing.

    Mimi, there was something different in your style. I can’t put my finger on it, maybe its just the fact that John Dee is interacting with his family and has a less formal demeanor that when dealing with the public. Whatever it is, it was fantastic. I love how you blended Kubla Khan into Sly’s world, plus Sly’s ability to come out on top of his relationship with John Dee. For Dee it seems he thinks he’s in control, then Sly reminds him who holds the strings. Well done!

    Perry, You always take me back to my childhood. A lot of time spent rough camping in the Rockies. One morning while camping on BLM land, we woke up in the middle of a sheep herd milling around our tent. Ranchers used BLM to move cattle and sheep around. Also, the night sky while camping… pure luxury for the eyes.

    Sue, I hear Olivia Newton-John singing in the background.🥰

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    1. mimispeike Avatar
      mimispeike

      Sue’s prompt Xanadu has opened a new area of fun to me. Her next prompt (youth) also sends me in a promising direction. Meaning to talk about Rowland, I discovered that in 1584 he would have been only five years old, not old enough to do for me what I want him to do.

      I’ve invented a new character, the son of John Dee’s distant cousin Twm Sion Cati, called the Welsh Robin Hood (absolutely true). Sion Cati married a wealthy widow, who bought him a pardon. He visited Dee in Mortlake several times. I have the boy taken into Dee’s household with the idea of finding him a position at court.

      Twm, in addition to being an outlaw, was a well-regarded poet. His son Tom will be a poet as well.

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    2. Sue Ranscht Avatar

      Sandy – I giggled about your giggle. 😊 The size surprised me, too, but I like it. Normally the Featured Image appears smaller and to the left of the title; I guess the Media Library AI loved your artwork.

      Olivia and that charmingly awful movie are always the first thoughts the word “Xanadu” drags from my mind, lol.

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  4. Sue Ranscht Avatar

    Sandy, about Modern Day Fable:

    I agree with your moral, and I know Xanadu was the city Shangdu, the summer capital of the Yuan dynasty in Inner Mongolia (an autonomous region of China). But the logic centers of my brain rioted at the mere possibility that Tibetan Buddhism could have been born in China. So I did some reading.

    Turns out, Tibetan Buddhism was born in — wait for it — Tibet, lol.

    https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Tibetan_Buddhism#:~:text=While%20some%20stories%20depict%20Buddhism,(618%E2%80%93649%20CE)

    No particular Tibetan city is singled out, and it’s true, Kublai Khan had an influence. From the same Wikipedia article:

    “In the pre-modern era, Tibetan Buddhism spread outside of Tibet primarily due to the influence of the Mongol Yuan dynasty (1271–1368), founded by Kublai Khan. . .”

    So, while Imani’s lack of respect for a character we don’t have the opportunity to judge for ourselves might be well-deserved, Imani hasn’t earned my trust that she is a completely reliable narrator.

    Besides, if she’d read Coleridge’s Kubla Khan (subtitled: Or, a vision in a dream. A Fragment.), or had ever practiced any kind of meditation, she might have been broader-minded about Elimu’s search for an inner Xanadu.

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    1. Sandy Randall Avatar

      Fair points Sue, Imani is a teen after all, in a small village. She knows what she knows. Especially as her writer spells it out to her. I misinformed her …
      From Unesco:

      https://whc.unesco.org/en/list/1389/

      Perhaps when Imani’s writer allows her to read Maya Angelou, she’ll do better when she knows better?

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      1. Sandy Randall Avatar

        Hmmm I think I have my inspiration for the next show case …. lol

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      2. Sue Ranscht Avatar

        Kublai Kahn got around, didn’t he? I see the two sentences that misled you into jumping right over the “Tibetan” tripwire to the “birthplace of”. Lol!

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  5. mimispeike Avatar
    mimispeike

    As participation waxes and wanes here, I worry. I hope this feature goes on until I have my series finished. These prompts are invaluable to me, as I’ve said, opening doors that I wouldn’t have opened by myself.

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    1. Sue Ranscht Avatar

      I think waxing and waning is a natural course. Show Case will continue, I promise.

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    2. Sandy Randall Avatar

      I will continue to submit. I feel it helps with my short stories and millimeter by millimeter… I see improvement in my writing. Plus the inspiration is compelling. I’ve written things I’d never consider because of Show case!

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      1. Sue Ranscht Avatar

        Thanks for that gratifying testimonial, Sandy. I’m thrilled Show Case provides so much inspiration for you and Mimi. I never anticipated everyone would write to every prompt, but I think everyone who has contributed has found some satisfaction in taking part. I’m confident people will continue to participate as they are inspired and have time.

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  6. mimispeike Avatar
    mimispeike

    Sandy, you’re right to call this a fable. It has the instructional, stilted feel of a fable, rather than a genuine interaction. This is an exploration of an idea, and that’s fine. I would hope to see these two closer to people I can relate to.

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    1. Sandy Randall Avatar

      Thanks Mimi, as I wrote it that was the feel I had in my head. The inspiration came from all of our groups conversations on reading.

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  7. Mellow Curmudgeon Avatar

    @ Sandy

    The “Shimmering heat” paragraph is so vivid about both what is happening and what Imani feels.

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    1. Sandy Randall Avatar

      Thanks Mel! I did rewrite that passage several times. I’m glad it worked for you as well as it did for me!

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  8. mimispeike Avatar
    mimispeike

    Sue, ‘Rare Device’ leads me to contemplate what Xanadu meant four centuries ago vs. what it means today. This is to the good in regard to my story. Sandy, your piece does the same for me.

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    1. Sue Ranscht Avatar

      That should be some interesting research. I wonder if Xanadu was considered to represent an idyllic fictional place prior to 1816 when Coleridge’s poem was published.

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      1. mimispeike Avatar
        mimispeike

        That’s what I wonder also.

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  9. mimispeike Avatar
    mimispeike

    Xanadu has really captured my imagination.

    I’m researching Mongolian song and dance. Sweeping upper body movement, lower body fairly stationary, and ‘throat singing’, guttural staccato or undulating tones and/or high, thin, screech-like sounds, often with a vibrato, all of which Sly manages easily. He demonstrates to Dee the moves with which he once entertained Kublai Khan. O-ek explains to Dee that on that occasion he assumed the form of a lovely lady of the court. Sly swipes a fringed runner off a table for a skirt, the better to sell the nonsense.

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    1. Sue Ranscht Avatar

      You piqued my interest even before Sly swiped the fringe. I’ve seen videos with “throat singing”, I don’t recall seeing the movements you describe, but I know I’ll enjoy your portrayal of Sly performing them.

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      1. Sandy Randall Avatar

        Thinking of a cat throat singing brings to mind hairballs lol.

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  10. mimispeike Avatar
    mimispeike

    Sue has my next Show Case, and I’ve made extensive notes for the piece that will be the wrap-up of the assassination plot. After that Sly is off to court. I thought I’d never get here. (I bet you did too.)

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    1. Sue Ranscht Avatar

      Congratulations, Mimi! Never give up. Never surrender.

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